Paternostro�s Promise


by Frank Thomas Smith



The sky in the east is tinged with orange as the sun prepares to rise over the Argentine Pampa. Patches of light reach into a beehive set in the garden of an upper-middle class suburban Buenos Aires home, signaling the start of another furiously active day. The first hunters step out onto the hive�s porch and soar off in search of the blossoms opening to receive them. Birds begin to sing softly outside the bedroom window.

����������� A shrill scream wrenches Marcos and Alicia Paternostro from sleep � a persisting cry of rage and pain. Marcos buries his head in the pillow as Alicia wearily drags her legs over the side of the bed and pulls herself erect. She looks at the clock on her night table. God, she murmurs, we�ve only slept for two hours. She walks into the adjoining room and picks an infant out of its crib. Its face is red with exertion and its tiny fingers are closed in tight fists. In response to Alicia�s soothing it reduces its cries to gasping whimpers. But as soon as it gets a second wind the fury breaks loose again and Alicia puts her son down in desperation.

����������� �Call the doctor!� Marcos Paternostro shouts.

����������� �I can�t call him now, it�s only six o�clock, and it�s Sunday,� Alicia says irritably.

����������� �Why not? Why should he sleep? Let him cure Marquitos, then he can sleep.�

����������� Alicia picks the baby up again, rests it over her shoulder and pats its back. She sits of the bed and looks at her husband with her marvelous black eyes, bloodshot now from lack of sleep.

����������� �Mar�a Elena told me yesterday about a woman in the Villa de las Tres Mar�as in whom everyone has confidence,� Alicia says. Marcos pretends not to hear, so she furiously pulls the pillow off his head. �Mar�a Elena knows a woman of confidence who can do wonders. Listen, damn it, Marcos. She never fails.�

����������� �And how, may I ask, does Mar�a Elena know that?� He rubs his eyes and sits up.

����������� �Well, she heard it, how she � Do�a Amalia is her name � has cured so many babies�including the Mart�nez�s little daughter.�

����������� �She heard it. And just because Mar�a Elena heard something from one of her gullible friends you want to take our son to a fucking witch in a villa miseria.� But he immediately regrets his harsh words, not because he doesn�t believe them, but because Alicia is looking at him with such misery and fear in her eyes.

����������� �But Marcos,� Alicia implores, �it�s been two weeks and the doctors can do nothing. He must have empacho. And she�s not a witch, she�s a curandera.�

����������� �Here, give him to me.� Marcos takes the baby, lies back down and holds it in the air above him. �What�s the matter, Marquitos, don�t you feel well, my poor little son?�

����������� The baby stops crying and looks down at its father�s face in surprise and what would have been pleasure if a pang of pain hadn�t shot through his stomach and set him off to crying again, although somewhat more softly.

����������� Curandera � witch doctor, same thing,� Paternostro says. �And empacho isn�t recognized by medical science.�

����������� Alicia brushes a lock of blond hair from her husband�s perspiring head. �Please Marcos,� she says, �he�s been eating like a bird and he�s as thin as a reed. I�m worried.�

����������� �The doctor says it�s constipation, colic, whatever, and not serious.� But Paternostro only says this not to give in too easily, for he is also worried.

����������� �He said it usually isn�t serious,� Alicia insists. �But Marquitos has all that poison in him and it could be serious. Besides, who can trust doctors nowadays?�


Despite his doubts, Marcos Paternostro is expectant as they approach the Villa de las Tres Mar�as slum in Mar�a Elena Lozano�s car. He passes it every day in the suburban train on his way to work in his architect�s studio in downtown Buenos Aires, but it is one of many and he has never paid much attention to it. It rained yesterday and their shoes are covered with mud as they make their way through a maze of shacks made of pieces of old wood and corrugated tin. Half-naked children lean out of glassless windows to stare at them.

����������� Mar�a Elena claps her hands three times in front of a shack adorned with crudely painted planets, moons and stars. A fat old woman of distinct Indian heritage pulls aside the curtain which serves as a door and smiles at them. Her face reminds Paternostro of a prune.

����������� �Good morning Do�a Amalia,� Mar�a Elena says. �I am Se�ora Lozano and these are the Se�ores Paternostro. Their child is ill. The Se�ora Mart�nez told you, I believe. �

����������� The old woman nods. �Enter please, se�ores,� she says.

����������� They must stoop to enter the shack and once inside there is barely room for them all. A long wooden table takes up almost half the space, a squat wood-burning stove is in a corner and one wall is covered with shelves containing dark unlabeled bottles. Over it hangs a crudely carved crucifix. A ragged curtain covers the entrance to another room, which must be small indeed. The floor is earthen. Do�a Amelia takes a kettle from the stove and fills a fist-sized m�te tea gourd with hot water. As custom demands, she partakes of the first draught herself, slurping noisily. Then she refills the gourd and offers it to Alicia, who hands the baby to Paternostro before emptying the gourd in three sips. After Mar�a Elena has imbibed, it is Paternostro�s turn. He hides his distaste at having to sip from the bronze straw which has already felt the impress of thousands of slum-dweller lips, but he knows that it would be offensive to refuse, so he hands Marquitos back to Alicia and swallows the bitter brew quickly.

����������� �Please excuse me for not having enough chairs for all to sit,� Do�a Amalia says, although there are no chairs at all in the room. Paternostro wonders if she is being ironic. She looks closely into Marquitos�s face. �Ay,� she exclaims, �the poor creature is empachado. How long has it been?���������

����������� �Two weeks,� Alicia answers.

����������� �Do�a Amalia frowns. �That is too long. You should have come earlier.�

����������� �We didn�t know about you earlier,� Alicia says, almost apologetically.

����������� �What is his name?�

����������� Marquitos,� Paternostro says,

����������� �Ah, and you are Marcos, I assume.�

����������� �That�s correct.� Paternostro again suspects irony, but who can be sure with such people.

����������� �I like your name, Se�or Paternostro,� Do�a Amalia says. She turns to Alicia. �Undress Marquitos and place him on the table on his stomach please.�

After Alicia removes the baby�s diapers, Do�a Amelia asks if Marquitos was fatter before the illness.

����������� �O yes,� Alicia replies, �he was quite chubby and now he is as thin as a reed.�

����������� Paternostro, feeling uncomfortably warm in the windowless room, puts his hands in his pockets and jingles some keys. Do�a Amelia takes a bottle from a shelf behind her and sprinkles a white powder over the small of the baby�s back. Then she closes her eyes and runs her gnarled fingers over the same area for about thirty seconds, her lips moving soundlessly the whole time. Her skin seems remarkably smooth while her eyes are closed, but when she opens them it collapses back into a mass of wrinkles.

����������� �Poor creature, the empacho is very strong.� She gathers a fold of skin from the small of Marquitos�s back into the thumb and next two fingers of both hands and pulls upward with a sharp jerk. A clapping sound results as though she had slapped her own fat backside. Marquitos�s shriek reverberates through the tiny room making the visitors wince. Alicia bites her lip, Mar�a Elena sighs deeply and Paternostro wants to jump forward and rescue his son, but he is rooted to the floor bathed in sweat. A foul odor begins to fill the room and they look at each other in alarm.

����������� �The empacho is passing,� Do�a Amelia announces happily. She executes another sharp jerk, the clap is repeated, Marquitos screams louder than ever and the foul odor becomes so strong that Paternostro feels he must leave soon or suffocate. Do�a Amelia pulls the skin a third time, but no clapping sound is heard and Marquitos cries softly.

����������� �It�s all over now and you can stop crying, Marquitos,� Do�a Amelia says. �Now tell the truth, don�t you feel better? She turns him over on his back and, wonder of wonders, he smiles at her. That�s what I thought, she says and bends over to kiss him on the cheek. She hands him to Alicia, who rapidly dresses him, thanks Do�a Amelia profusely and leaves the stifling room, followed by Mar�a Elena. Once outside she calls back: �He�s laughing, Marcos. Thank God he�s all better.�

���������� Paternostro takes out his wallet and, without looking at her, asks Do�a Amelia how much he owes her. She remains silent until he raises his eyes from the wallet and looks at her.

����������� �It is enough for me to see the poor creature well again,� she says. Then, after a pause during which Paternostro stands there embarrased with his wallet in his hand: �Say a prayer for me.�

He takes a hundred peso bill from the wallet and holds it out to her. �I don�t pray,� he says.

����������� �Then you shall pray this once for me. A Padre Nuestro would be appropriate, Se�or Paternostro, considering your name.� Her voice is firm and Marcos is anxious to breathe some fresh air.

����������� �Well?� she asks.

����������� �All right,� he mumbles.

����������� �Do you promise?�

����������� �Yes�if you insist.�

����������� �Good.� She takes the bill from his limp hand and stuffs it into her apron pocket. �Adi�s, Se�or Paternostro.�

����������� Marcos stumbles out of the shack and gasps for air. The others have gone ahead to wait for him in the car. He follows, ignoring the mud.

����������� �Come back, Colita, you thief!� A painfully thin child chasing a small dog with a rag doll in its mouth passes so close in front of him that she trips over his foot and sprawls in the mud. He moves to help her up, but she springs to her feet before he can touch her. Forgetting the dog for a moment, she tilts her head up at him and asks, �Is it better now, se�or?�

����������� �What? O yes, much better now, thank you.�

����������� The dog, upset that the chase has been interrupted, drops the doll in front of its paws and barks shrilly at them.

����������� �Colita, thief, give me back my doll!� The dog picks up the doll and runs crazily in circles for a moment before disappearing around the corner of a shack. The child, hair and limbs flying, follows.


�Look, Marcos,� Alicia says as they drive home, �Marquitos is asleep. He will probably sleep for a week to make up for all he has missed. But he must eat, poor dear, he is as thin as a reed.

����������� �You two look as though you could use a week of sleep yourselves,� Mar�a Elena says. �Tell me, Marcos, how much did she charge?�

����������� �Who?�

����������� �Do�a Amalia, of course.�

����������� �Not much.�

����������� In order to give information, which is power, she recently read, one must first obtain it. And Mar�a Elena is not one to be put off. �How much?�

����������� Paternostro is tempted to tell them about his promise and make a joke of it, but somehow it doesn�t seem very funny. �Just a promise,� he says.

����������� Mar�a Elena laughs. �Why, that�s too precious. And you promised?�

����������� �Yes.�

����������� �What?�

����������� �It�s a secret between us.�

����������� They stop at a closed railroad crossing and Mar�a Elena is reluctantly silent while an old train clatters loudly by. Then, once they have crossed the tracks: �Come on, Marcos, she must have charged something; tell us the secret.�

����������� �I think she liked Marquitos very much,� Alicia says, saving him.

����������� �Hmm, yes, possibly,� Mar�a Elena says. �What do you think, Marcos?�

����������� Oh yes, I think so, too,� Paternostro answers, truthfully.


The sun is setting and the sky in the west is tinged with orange. The bees have returned to the hive with their last loads of nectar and pollen. The birds are chirping loudly, as is their custom in the spring. Marcos Paternostro is suddenly aware of being ignorant of many things. But of one thing he is certain: this night they will all sleep well.